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Jaw Trap

by Roan Type

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Angelica was 44 years old and had been a dentist for twenty years, which meant she knew the weight of every box in her office by feel.

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Angelica was 44 years old and had been a dentist for twenty years, which meant she knew the weight of every box in her office by feel. She was moving the practice into a new building on the east side of town, and the old building had to be empty by Friday. So on a Tuesday evening in October she drove out to U-Keep-It Storage off the highway bypass and started unboxing her overflow.

The unit was 7B. The facility was open twenty-four hours and the night attendant, a big quiet man named Colt, had nodded at her when she signed in. She had waved back. The entire relationship had been like that so far.

Unit 7B was half packed and dusty. Boxes of dental equipment stacked to the ceiling on one side, personal effects on the other, a narrow aisle down the middle. She had rented it three weeks ago and she was already tired of it. The overhead light buzzed. The floor was bare concrete. Somewhere down the row a door banged in the wind.

She cut the tape on a box marked CABINET, UPPER and dragged out the pieces of a metal dental cabinet she had bought used in 2019. She knelt on the concrete with a screwdriver and started fitting the frame together, and that was when she heard the sound.

It came through the wall. The wall on the right side of her unit, the one she shared with 7C, was thin corrugated metal, and it carried everything. A wet, rhythmic sound. Steady. Slow at first, then faster, then slow again, like somebody working at something with their whole body.

She stopped with the screwdriver halfway into a screw.

Then she heard a man groan. Low. She knew that voice. She had listened to it for two years across a small office, saying, You can rinse now, Dr. Reyes, and, Your ten o'clock cancelled.

"Lukas?" she said out loud, to nobody.

The sound through the wall kept going. The groaning kept going. She sat back on her heels on the concrete floor and did not get up for a while, and she would not have told anyone what she did with her hand, either, except that she was alone and there was nobody to tell.

Afterward she felt like a fool. She was forty-four, she owned a practice, she had dated off and on for the past four years since her last boyfriend ended things when she was forty, and here she was sitting on a storage unit floor listening to her own hygienist through a metal wall. She finished the cabinet. She did not finish it quickly.

The wet sound stopped near nine. A car door closed out in the lot. Headlights swept across the gap at the bottom of her roll-up door and pulled away. She sat in the buzzing light and thought, well, that's that, and then she thought about it all the way home.

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The next day Lukas came in looking like he had slept nine hours and won something.

He was twenty-nine, hired two years ago out of a hygiene program, good with nervous patients. He set up his tray, hummed a little, cracked his knuckles. Joy, the office manager, gave Angelica a look over his head that said, do you see this.

"I see it," Angelica murmured.

"See what?" Lukas asked, laying out mirrors.

"Nothing. You're chipper today."

"Good sleep," he said, and grinned at the tray, not at her.

At lunch she caught Joy in the break room. Joy was thirty-seven and had run Angelica's front desk for ten years, and she had a radar for trouble that Angelica trusted more than her own.

"He was at the storage place last night," Angelica said. "Same time as me."

"Your unit?"

"Next to it. 7C."

Joy paused with her fork in the air. "That's the unit nobody rents. Colt told me when I signed us up. It's been on the books as vacant for years."

"Then who does he visit?"

"You're sure it was him?"

"I heard him. Joy, I heard him." She did not say what else she had heard. Joy looked at her a second longer than she needed to, and Angelica moved on before it became a conversation.

That afternoon Lukas checked a patient, scaled her, polished her, sent her up front, and at four o'clock he said he was going to run an errand before end of day. He came back at five with dust on his knees. Nobody has dust on their knees from an errand. Angelica knew what concrete looked like when it had been knelt on.

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She went back Thursday evening, because the cabinet still needed shelves and because she wanted to. She told herself both reasons equally and believed neither.

She had been there maybe forty minutes, wrangling a box of handpieces, when she heard boots on concrete out in the row. She knew the walk. She moved without deciding to, back behind the stack of boxes on the left side, where the ceiling-high wall of cartons made a blind corner. Through the gap at the bottom of her own roll-up door she could see feet pass. Then she heard the latch of 7C, two units down, and the rattle of its door sliding.

Then nothing, for a minute. Then a voice, low, too low to catch words, and then a different kind of sound, a scrape, heavy, like something large shifting its weight on concrete.

She stood in the dust and the buzzing dark, one hand flat against a box marked EXAM CHAIRS, PARTS, and did not breathe.

What came out of 7C's open door was not what she expected. An arm came out first. A long, scaled arm, green-gray, longer than a man's arm by half again, reaching out into the row like it was feeling for something. The scales caught the outside floodlight and shone wet. It stretched, flexed, claws at the end clicking once against the doorframe.

Then it closed around the front of Lukas's jacket, where he stood just inside the door, and pulled him in with one easy motion, the way you'd pull a chair closer. He went laughing. She heard him laugh, low, before the door slid shut and the latch dropped.

Angelica stayed behind the boxes for a long time. The light in her unit buzzed. Down the row, through the thin wall, after a while, the wet rhythmic sound started up again, and this time she could place the rhythm exactly, and she did not need to imagine anything at all, which was somehow worse.

She drove home at eleven without finishing the shelves.

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Friday she found an excuse. Inventory. She had Joy print a list and she spent the morning ticking boxes that did not need ticking, and at four o'clock she told Lukas she was heading to the unit and he was welcome to help lift if he was free.

He said no, thanks, he had plans. He said it smooth, he said it fast, and he was out the door twenty minutes after her.

She beat him there. She parked on the far side of the lot, out of the floodlight, and she sat in her car with the engine ticking and watched the row. Colt the attendant came out once to chain a gate and glanced her way. She lifted a hand. He lifted his and went back in, and that was all he ever said about anything, which she came to appreciate.

Lukas's car pulled in at seven. He crossed the lot with his hood up like that helped, and he walked the row casual as anything, and he stopped at 7C, and he looked over his shoulder once, and he slid the door and went inside.

Angelica got out of her car.

She went in through her own unit, 7B, quiet on the concrete, and she stood in the dark behind her boxes with the buzzing light off. The wall between 7B and 7C was thin. She could hear everything. She had proven that on Tuesday, to her own embarrassment and nobody else's.

Through the metal came the scrape of that big scaled body moving. Then Lukas's voice, muffled, bright, the way he got with a nervous patient. "Missed you, you big..."

Something answered. It was not speech exactly. It was a sound like water moving over stones, deep, and it went on a while, and Lukas laughed at whatever it said.

Then the wet rhythmic sound started, and this time she heard Lukas's groan go with it, ragged, and she heard a second voice underneath, the stones-and-water one, keeping the same rhythm.

Angelica pressed her palm flat to the wall. The metal was cool. It shivered faintly with every beat of what was happening two feet from her hand.

She should have left. She knew that. She was her hygienist's boss, she was forty-four years old, she was standing in a dark storage unit listening to something she had no part in, and she did not leave. She wanted what was on the other side of that wall, and she had wanted it since Tuesday, and wanting it was the only honest thing she had done in months.

When it was over, and it took a long time, she heard Lukas laugh again, tired, and say something she couldn't catch, and then the latch, and boots, and his car pulling out of the lot alone.

She stayed until her legs went numb. Then she took the receipt paper out of her purse and a pen, and she wrote on the wall side of it, in the dark, by feel: "I know. I heard. I'm in 7B. Come find me." She folded it small and pushed it through the gap at the bottom of the shared wall, and heard it tick against concrete on the far side.

The note stayed gone. Angelica waited a while with her ear to the wall and heard nothing but the facility's air conditioner cycling somewhere behind the rows. No scrape. No stones over water. She straightened up, wiped her palms on her jeans, and went home feeling she had mailed a letter and immediately wanted it back.

Saturday she unpacked three boxes of hand instruments and autoclave pouches and thought about the wall. Sunday she did nothing at all, which was its own kind of torture. Monday she ran the front desk at the old office while Joy boxed patient files, and Lukas cleaned two crowns and a fluoride and said maybe four words the whole day.

"You okay?" Joy asked her, at the end of it. Joy was thirty-seven, seven years younger than Angelica and ten years at the desk, and she had a way of asking things that made not answering rude. "You've been somewhere else all day."

"New building," Angelica said. "The move. It's a lot."

"It's a move. We've all done moves." Joy taped a box shut. "Lukas, you get the ultrasonic over to 7B tonight? She's storing half the practice in that unit."

Lukas looked up from his tray setup like a man waking from a nap. "Tonight? I, uh. Yeah. I can. I'll do it."

He did not do it. Angelica checked the lot at seven and his car was not in it, and she drove out to U-Keep-It anyway, alone, telling herself it was about the ultrasonic.

She got there a little after eight. Colt was in his little office with a radio on, and he raised two fingers off the counter when she came through the door, and that was their whole

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Angelica was 44 years old and had been a dentist for twenty years, which meant she knew the weight of every box in her office by feel. She was moving the practice into a new building on the east side of town, and the old building had to be empty by Friday. So on a Tuesday evening in October she…

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